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Painting Painting \ Figure | 07/16/06 @807 | eduart | Comments critiques (12) | Views views (684)


Memory
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Hi everyone....again
here is my lastest artwork...I've tried to express strong emotions...I hope I made it...you decide ;)
cc welcomed
PS: made with photoshop and without ref
 
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Avatar Azurelle

 07/16/06 @815

The colorscheme and the overall integration of the girl in the background is very well done.
But I'd also suggest to overwork the background a bt more; it looks unfinished compared to the girl.
 
waheednasir

 07/16/06 @827

i like how u painted the girl...uve achieved what u were looking for...:). background is a bit distracting though.
 
Avatar NoxiouS

 07/16/06 @859

Maby you could have stuck with one color for the bg, but the girl is beautiful, her exprecion looks so natural, the highlights in her hair on the right of her face looks to bright though...

Good job 6/7
 
Avatar Daykan

 07/16/06 @883

amazing work!!
 
Cassander

 07/17/06 @986

the impresionist background make the strong emotion, but the face of the girl is very gentle and peaceful. Put atention in this point if you want to make strong emotions.
The painting is amazing!, congratulations, you´re so young.
 
Avatar Stormkrow

 07/17/06 @056

Well done, looking forward to more.
 
Avatar Kadary

 07/17/06 @300

I love the colors and how she melts into the background :)
 
Avatar SchatziElfe

 07/17/06 @340

I loke the pensive look you've captured on her face. A bit of polishing as mentioned above, but still a beautiful work. I like the background, just think it would work better with another subject:)
 
Vyano-Xiaah

 07/17/06 @548

I think the bold background is needed to represent the concept of strong emotions. Emotions aren't just about a person, they're about everything around and this represents that. The unfinished look that the above artists have mentioned, I believe add to the intense emotions. It's like the emotionals all merge in to one and make the girl so confused.

I really like the way you have painted her hair and facial features but I think the upper lip is too thick, especially at the two peaks. I also wonder why her top continues to rise above her shoulder? It just looks a little out of place.

Very nice work none-the-less. :)
 
eduart

 07/17/06 @572

Thanks you all...I love reading your critiques..they are all constructive and natural (if I can say so)
@Vyano-Xiaah you are right...only now I realise that the top is much too higher into the air than needed...now I remember that every time I've painted that part always I left it the same ---I think my subconscious has something to do with I'll do some modifications...the shirt seems to be too flat (must add shadows and crop a litle bit)

once again thank you all
 
Avatar IraMelanox

 09/17/06 @775

I like the strong lighting, and as usual, the colors... maybe you could add some more life into her eyes, with some little "sparks" or reflections... ;) +9
Another minor thing... try painting the upper lip a bit darker than the lower one; the same for the corners of the mouth... it will add more volume ;)
 
Avatar Cigaro

 09/17/06 @925

her right eye is a bit too up compared to the right one...ira has a good idea regarding the lip shading:)
anywho, you created a very good atmo:)
 
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Full Name:
  Eduard Mirica
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  05/31/1988 (20)
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  06/30/2006

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